when I got home I decided to get a little daring with the tree and saw that there was a weak branch turned it into a jin then realised a shari would add to the design so here are the pics I know the deadwood cant be seen that well but the tree looks amazing now and I'm really happy with its shape although its a young tree it looks like a strugling young tree

I was going for a literati look but I thought removing the lower branch will be too much for the tree so I left it with this informal upright style
what do u guys think was it better off before or now ?
the tree before notice that scar at the top of the tree that I really did not like
the tree as I bought it....
[img]https://i381.photobucket.com/albums/oo259/uzeyr_bonsai/bbudda%20pien%20with%20jin/jin%20tree/illustrayr1.jpg[/img]
a full view of the so called back now the front of the tree
[img]https://i381.photobucket.com/albums/oo259/uzeyr_bonsai/bbudda%20pien%20with%20jin/jin%20tree/CIMG6231.jpg[/img]
the tree with the jin and the shari
[img]https://i381.photobucket.com/albums/oo259/uzeyr_bonsai/bbudda%20pien%20with%20jin/jin%20tree/CIMG6238.jpg[/img]
[img]https://i381.photobucket.com/albums/oo259/uzeyr_bonsai/bbudda%20pien%20with%20jin/jin%20tree/CIMG6258.jpg[/img]
I decided to get rid of the jin beacause it was obstructing the shari so here it is the tree in its final image
[img]https://i381.photobucket.com/albums/oo259/uzeyr_bonsai/bbudda%20pien%20with%20jin/jin%20tree/CIMG6277.jpg[/img]